This story was a Naruto Fan Fic i wrote on 07/29/2008, that makes me want to kill myself.
**READ THE BOTTOM TO UNDERSTAND THE HIGHLIGHTING**
First of all this is the first line.
'im walkin home from school with karin we are in the world of naruto and naruto came running up and asking karin to walk him home.'
What kind of story specifies the fandom? Really, I want to hit my past self with the grammar sack. But it gets better!
'..she said yes. so they left me(MEANYS)and i see 2 pairs of eyes looking at me. i was scaredthis was wat i looked ~insert a picture here cause it wont work~ like i call outwho is it no answer answer me darn it a voice calls out you shoud know
holy $#!t it was sasori and deidara .waddya want'
BRAVO! This is true quality content people! *insert slow clap here*. First of all, Deidara has one eye, and second, USE QUOTES, THEY EXIST!!!"""""""""""""" LOOK! """""""""""".......Im done now.
Next is!~
.. we want you 2 come with us. #3ll no i yell out*gets ko'ed by a bat.* i woke up 2 deidara & sasori deidara& u(eliya)
wel well ur up dei sayz.F%!# ui say.hey not nice u say.(gosh im mean LOL nottttt)sasori sazSTOP FIGHTINGNOWWW!!! wer all like MURPPP OR MEEP (wat ever 1 u want) *leader walks in* well done he sayz.... YOU IDOTS U GOT THE WRONG PERSON !!! O well she can join i guess. wayddya say tobi sayz{i think i shoud i wont hav 2 deal w\ karin @ least}wat if i say nooo.will i kill you pein said . i sayyy . TO BE CONTINUED....I dont even understand the highlighted yellow area. What was I on! THERE NINJAS! WHY DO THEY HAVE BATS!
Lets highlight all of the incorrect terminology in green, shall we?
How out of character could I made Sasori? Ill make It red for you.
Did I even know about capital letters?
Needless to say, I never continued this monstrosity.
Link to the story~http://quizilla.teennick.com/stories/7629303/ayayamis-story-u-r-eliya
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